This is an interesting subject. I love the lighting and look of the space. You need more variety in your shots though. Out of 20 shots everything comes from the same angle and there are only 2 shot sizes. Turn around and show me the faces and eyes of the guys working on the laptops. Show a 90 degree birds eye view. Give a wide shot of the environment their working in.
I have to agree with Prof. Langston--the circuit board makes a beautiful picture, especially with the spot lightning from above. But it's all we see the whole time. Zoom in on their hands at work, or show the intensity of their expressions, and it will add a lot more interest. A low angle, right at tabletop level, would work nicely.
This is a cool presentation and makes an interesting story. You could work the photos into a .gif, that would be a cool piece for a website !, *&8. Those circuit-boards are visual butter & the tat's are nice too >)
This is an interesting subject. I love the lighting and look of the space. You need more variety in your shots though. Out of 20 shots everything comes from the same angle and there are only 2 shot sizes. Turn around and show me the faces and eyes of the guys working on the laptops. Show a 90 degree birds eye view. Give a wide shot of the environment their working in.
ReplyDeleteI have to agree with Prof. Langston--the circuit board makes a beautiful picture, especially with the spot lightning from above. But it's all we see the whole time. Zoom in on their hands at work, or show the intensity of their expressions, and it will add a lot more interest. A low angle, right at tabletop level, would work nicely.
ReplyDeleteThis is a cool presentation and makes an interesting story. You could work the photos into a .gif, that would be a cool piece for a website !, *&8. Those circuit-boards are visual butter & the tat's are nice too >)
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